Second Draft
who is my audience?
Since my research question is do vaccines one of the reasons that cause disorder of neural development (Autism) so I think my main audience are the parents of the children who take the vaccines because they get to chose whether their children will get the vaccine or not.
I think in my case I will only use time to describe the history of autism development and also the vaccine development and the relation between them.
I am investigating in this subject because as I mentioned in first blog one of my relative has autism. I think if I understood autism and its causes I might help in the curing for the behavior part using new technologies such as computers and Kinect (motion sensing device mainly used now for video games).
I don't really know about the high school writing part since in my country we didn't study much of writing not to mention a research paper, but I think maybe it's because they want it completely academic and they thought students might not have enough experience and information about the topic.
of course I have seen the two main argument in my research paper which is :
1- vaccine one of the main reason that cause autism.
2- Vaccine has nothing to do with the increasing number of people who get autism.
One of the new interesting things I have learned this week is that vaccine industry is a billion dollar industry so people and companies of both side of the argument are defending their cause. One of the lawyers bribed some lab to make results that match one of the argument side!
I have learned that you might get a lot of results in the library article search but you can refine you research by putting some criteria that narrow down the results.
First Draft
so I will answer the question that has been asked in ms. Ingram third blog assignment.
who is my audience?
who is my audience?
Since my research question is do vaccines one of the reasons that cause disorder of neural development (Autism) so I think my main audience are the parents of the children who take the vaccines because they get to chose whether their children will get the vaccine or not.
I think in my case I will only use time to describe the history of autism development and also the vaccine development and the relation between them.
I am investigating in this subject because as I mentioned in first blog one of my relative has autism. I think if I understood autism and its causes I might help in the curing for the behavior part using new technologies such as computers and Kinect (motion sensing device mainly used now for video games).
I don't really know about the high school writing part since in my country we didn't study much of writing not to mention a research paper, but I think maybe it's because they want it completely academic and they thought students might not have enough experience and information about the topic.
of course I have seen the two main argument in my research paper which is :
1- vaccine one of the main reason that cause autism.
2- Vaccine has nothing to do with the increasing number of people who get autism.
One of the new interesting things I have learned this week is that vaccine industry is a billion dollar industry so people and companies of both side of the argument are defending their cause. One of the lawyers bribed some lab to make results that match one of the argument side!
I have learned that you might get a lot of results in the library article search but you can refine you research by putting some criteria that narrow down the results.
First Draft
so I will answer the question that has been asked in ms. Ingram third blog assignment.
who is my audience?
Since my research question is do vaccine one of the reasons that cause disorder of neural development (Autism) so I think my main audience are the parents of the children who take the vaccine because they get to choose whether their children will get the vaccine or not.
as about the question about the time I think in my case I will only use time to describe the history of autism development and also the vaccine development and the relation between them.
and I am investing in this subject because as I mentioned in first blog one of my relative got the autism. and I think if I understood the Autism and it's medicine and causes I might can help in the curing for the behavior part using new technologies such as computers and Kinect (motion sensing device mainly used now for video games).
I don't really know about the high school teaching part since in my country we didn't study much of writing not to imagine a research paper, but I think may be it's because they want it completely academic and they thought students might not have enough experience and information about the topic.
of course I have seen the two main argument in my research paper which is :
1- vaccine one of the main reason that cause autism.
2- Vaccine has nothing to do with the increasing number of people who get the autism.
1- vaccine one of the main reason that cause autism.
2- Vaccine has nothing to do with the increasing number of people who get the autism.
one of the new interesting things I have learned this week is that vaccine industry is billions of dollars industry so people and company of both side of the argument are defending their cause. it even got to bribe some lab to make results that match one of the argument side!
I have learned that you might get a lot of results in the library article search but you can refine you reserch by putting some criteria that narrow down the results.
I have responsed to Cody Talley blog about frozen food and microwave at this -link-.
Hisham Almalibari
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